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Before...


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My Critique?


I prefer the old Norman Rockwell Graphic,
And on the second, the word "We" could use extra boldness.


Other wise, yer pretty damned good at your craft! (fer a city kid)

Norman's piece has to go for legal reasons. I agree with you on the "we" on the fascism one.

Maybe unkie Sam with a fist in the air?

Otherwise, (or even not otherwise) BRAVO!

And yet this was my favorite out of the lot, I think it makes the statement more strong (please forgive the botched grammar!), where's as
this...

sells the sentiment better.

Both good, but, for me, the reworked (Uncle Sam) one has more punch.

ohhhhhhhhhh.... I like that. I really like that.

Good deal. I think the Rockwell family may still have rights to that image, so I have to let it go.

can you do that? I'd buy one.

I like them both, particularly the second one.
Nice clean-up job on the creases.

It's good to see ya Panda!

Thanks, Sky. Good to see you too.

Thanks. I'm gonna try to get Uncle SAm's fist up in the air later today. Good to see you around again. We've missed you.

Yay!

I'm stuck on the quarterly newsletter tonight, it'll prolly be tomorrow.

So, is sammy raising his hand 'cause he's "sure" yet?

It's almost done. Looks pretty good, too

Update: It's finished now, but I just found a better fist to use, so I'm reworking it.

can't wait to see it...
Did my mail get there yet?

Nope, not yet

OK. Here it is. I'm still not satisfied with the finished product, maybe I'm overly critical. Will this work for ya? If not, don't be afraid to say so.

I really appreciate all the hard work and all,
But ya gots a problem there boss.


That's a left hand on a right arm.

I was looking and looking and couldn't see what it was that wasn't right about it!

Looks like you've been working tired boss! That along with the solstice energies (upheaval) and 4 planets in retrograde! If you've achieved anything at all over the past few days you're doing well. (Personally, I can barely string a sentence together!)
My advice... just keep low and wait for it to pass!

Yeah, something like that!

well shit... *scampers back to drawing board*

edit to add: NOT ANY MORE!



Now I know why it didn't look right to me.

Well done! And it does look better with the fist up in the air.

POWER TO THE PEOPLE!

looks great... (hesitate to add) My vision of it was straight up, without the elbow bend... like the black panthers... imagine if the fist overlayed the wording...
but it really looks good.

If you can wait another day or so, I can arrange that.

on second thought, how's it look now? =-)

It looks Great!
Except for tha big open blank space under his raised arm.

Suck it.

Lots of laughing very loudly!

Me too. My wife wanted to know what was so damn funny. =-)

Great ! That's it! I want one!... Mail must've gotten there by now, right? it'll be a week tomorrow.

Yup yup. Thank you very much. and you over paid, so I'll throw in some extra goodies, too.

hey, i wasn't paying for the shirt, I was paying for everything that I appreciate about the POAC... The shirt's just the cherry on top!