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sky of mind
My Critique?


I prefer the old Norman Rockwell Graphic,
And on the second, the word "We" could use extra boldness.


Other wise, yer pretty damned good at your craft! (fer a city kid)
POAC
QUOTE(sky of mind @ Wednesday, 13 June 2007, 4:05 pm) [snapback]95650[/snapback]
My Critique?
I prefer the old Norman Rockwell Graphic,
And on the second, the word "We" could use extra boldness.
Other wise, yer pretty damned good at your craft! (fer a city kid)


Norman's piece has to go for legal reasons. I agree with you on the "we" on the fascism one.
seuss
Maybe unkie Sam with a fist in the air?

Otherwise, (or even not otherwise) BRAVO!
karen

And yet this was my favorite out of the lot, I think it makes the statement more strong (please forgive the botched grammar!), where's as
this...

sells the sentiment better.

Both good, but, for me, the reworked (Uncle Sam) one has more punch.
POAC
QUOTE(seuss @ Wednesday, 13 June 2007, 8:32 pm) [snapback]95661[/snapback]
Maybe unkie Sam with a fist in the air?

Otherwise, (or even not otherwise) BRAVO!




ohhhhhhhhhh.... I like that. I really like that.
POAC
QUOTE(karen @ Thursday, 14 June 2007, 3:03 am) [snapback]95674[/snapback]

And yet this was my favorite out of the lot, I think it makes the statement more strong (please forgive the botched grammar!), where's as
this...

sells the sentiment better.

Both good, but, for me, the reworked (Uncle Sam) one has more punch.


Good deal. I think the Rockwell family may still have rights to that image, so I have to let it go.
seuss
QUOTE(POAC @ Thursday, 14 June 2007, 9:47 am) [snapback]95699[/snapback]
ohhhhhhhhhh.... I like that. I really like that.

can you do that? I'd buy one.
Panda
QUOTE(POAC @ Wednesday, 13 June 2007, 3:00 pm) [snapback]95648[/snapback]




I like them both, particularly the second one.
Nice clean-up job on the creases. smile.gif
sky of mind
It's good to see ya Panda! thumbup.gif
Panda
QUOTE(sky of mind @ Friday, 15 June 2007, 7:43 pm) [snapback]95885[/snapback]
It's good to see ya Panda! thumbup.gif


Thanks, Sky. Good to see you too. smile.gif
POAC
QUOTE(Panda @ Friday, 15 June 2007, 6:41 pm) [snapback]95881[/snapback]
I like them both, particularly the second one.
Nice clean-up job on the creases. smile.gif


Thanks. I'm gonna try to get Uncle SAm's fist up in the air later today. Good to see you around again. We've missed you.
seuss
QUOTE(POAC @ Saturday, 16 June 2007, 1:05 pm) [snapback]95934[/snapback]
Thanks. I'm gonna try to get Uncle SAm's fist up in the air later today. Good to see you around again. We've missed you.


Yay!
POAC
QUOTE(seuss @ Saturday, 16 June 2007, 8:21 pm) [snapback]95967[/snapback]
Yay!


I'm stuck on the quarterly newsletter tonight, it'll prolly be tomorrow.
seuss
QUOTE(POAC @ Saturday, 16 June 2007, 8:31 pm) [snapback]95969[/snapback]
I'm stuck on the quarterly newsletter tonight, it'll prolly be tomorrow.


So, is sammy raising his hand 'cause he's "sure" yet?
POAC
QUOTE(seuss @ Monday, 18 June 2007, 12:49 pm) [snapback]96135[/snapback]
So, is sammy raising his hand 'cause he's "sure" yet?


It's almost done. Looks pretty good, too
POAC
Update: It's finished now, but I just found a better fist to use, so I'm reworking it.
seuss
QUOTE(POAC @ Friday, 22 June 2007, 10:37 am) [snapback]96572[/snapback]
Update: It's finished now, but I just found a better fist to use, so I'm reworking it.


can't wait to see it...
Did my mail get there yet?
POAC
QUOTE(seuss @ Friday, 22 June 2007, 10:58 am) [snapback]96573[/snapback]
can't wait to see it...
Did my mail get there yet?


Nope, not yet
POAC

OK. Here it is. I'm still not satisfied with the finished product, maybe I'm overly critical. Will this work for ya? If not, don't be afraid to say so.

sky of mind
QUOTE(POAC @ Sunday, 24 June 2007, 1:45 pm) [snapback]96743[/snapback]
OK. Here it is. I'm still not satisfied with the finished product, maybe I'm overly critical. Will this work for ya? If not, don't be afraid to say so.




I really appreciate all the hard work and all,
But ya gots a problem there boss.


That's a left hand on a right arm.
karen
QUOTE(sky of mind @ Sunday, 24 June 2007, 2:52 pm) [snapback]96745[/snapback]
I really appreciate all the hard work and all,
But ya gots a problem there boss.
That's a left hand on a right arm.

I was looking and looking and couldn't see what it was that wasn't right about it!

Looks like you've been working tired boss! That along with the solstice energies (upheaval) and 4 planets in retrograde! If you've achieved anything at all over the past few days you're doing well. (Personally, I can barely string a sentence together!)
My advice... just keep low and wait for it to pass! unsure.gif
sky of mind
QUOTE(karen @ Sunday, 24 June 2007, 2:16 pm) [snapback]96750[/snapback]
I was looking and looking and couldn't see what it was that wasn't right about it!

Looks like you've been working tired boss! That along with the solstice energies (upheaval) and 4 planets in retrograde! If you've achieved anything at all over the past few days you're doing well. (Personally, I can barely string a sentence together!)
My advice... just keep low and wait for it to pass! unsure.gif



karen
QUOTE(sky of mind @ Sunday, 24 June 2007, 3:24 pm) [snapback]96753[/snapback]


Yeah, something like that! laugh.gif
POAC
QUOTE(sky of mind @ Sunday, 24 June 2007, 2:52 pm) [snapback]96745[/snapback]
I really appreciate all the hard work and all,
But ya gots a problem there boss.
That's a left hand on a right arm.



well shit... *scampers back to drawing board*

edit to add: NOT ANY MORE!

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Now I know why it didn't look right to me. redface.gif
sky of mind
QUOTE(POAC @ Sunday, 24 June 2007, 3:07 pm) [snapback]96764[/snapback]
well shit... *scampers back to drawing board*

edit to add: NOT ANY MORE!

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Now I know why it didn't look right to me. redface.gif




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Well done! And it does look better with the fist up in the air.



POWER TO THE PEOPLE!
seuss
QUOTE(POAC @ Sunday, 24 June 2007, 4:07 pm) [snapback]96764[/snapback]
well shit... *scampers back to drawing board*

edit to add: NOT ANY MORE!

laugh.gif

Now I know why it didn't look right to me. redface.gif

looks great... (hesitate to add) My vision of it was straight up, without the elbow bend... like the black panthers... imagine if the fist overlayed the wording...
but it really looks good.
POAC
QUOTE(seuss @ Sunday, 24 June 2007, 6:18 pm) [snapback]96774[/snapback]
looks great... (hesitate to add) My vision of it was straight up, without the elbow bend... like the black panthers... imagine if the fist overlayed the wording...
but it really looks good.



If you can wait another day or so, I can arrange that.
POAC
on second thought, how's it look now? =-)
sky of mind
QUOTE(POAC @ Sunday, 24 June 2007, 6:28 pm) [snapback]96790[/snapback]
on second thought, how's it look now? =-)




It looks Great!
Except for tha big open blank space under his raised arm.
POAC
QUOTE(sky of mind @ Sunday, 24 June 2007, 7:46 pm) [snapback]96791[/snapback]
It looks Great!
Except for tha big open blank space under his raised arm.


Suck it.

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sky of mind
QUOTE(POAC @ Sunday, 24 June 2007, 6:54 pm) [snapback]96793[/snapback]
Suck it.

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Lots of laughing very loudly! tongue.gif
POAC
QUOTE(sky of mind @ Sunday, 24 June 2007, 9:08 pm) [snapback]96808[/snapback]
Lots of laughing very loudly! tongue.gif


Me too. My wife wanted to know what was so damn funny. =-)
seuss
Great ! That's it! I want one!... Mail must've gotten there by now, right? it'll be a week tomorrow.
POAC
QUOTE(seuss @ Monday, 25 June 2007, 4:02 pm) [snapback]96897[/snapback]
Great ! That's it! I want one!... Mail must've gotten there by now, right? it'll be a week tomorrow.


Yup yup. Thank you very much. and you over paid, so I'll throw in some extra goodies, too. smile.gif
seuss
QUOTE(POAC @ Tuesday, 26 June 2007, 2:39 pm) [snapback]97015[/snapback]
Yup yup. Thank you very much. and you over paid, so I'll throw in some extra goodies, too. smile.gif

hey, i wasn't paying for the shirt, I was paying for everything that I appreciate about the POAC... The shirt's just the cherry on top!
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